As we age, the urge to reconnect with the past becomes stronger. Some images are still clearly etched, while most are not. Eyes go misty and a lump forms in the throat as we reminisce of the days gone by with our friends and family. A photograph ,a card, a notebook, a box of knick knacks, a dress buried in the wardrobe, an equipment lying in disuse ...any of these can be a trigger to take a trip down the Memory Lane. I am currently visiting my hometown Patna...need I say more ?!☺️
Memory Lane
I didn't find it on Google Maps ,The broad street , or was it narrow?
Was it straight or meandering?
Lined with homes with open doors,
Winds zinged through uncurtained windows.
Dusty images of people long ago ,
Smiling eyes, questioning eyes, quarrelling eyes ,
Basking in lemony winter sun,
All enveloped in warm cotton wool. Laughing voices ,shrieking voices, carefree voices ,
Sailing across cool terraces,
All muted in layers of felt .
A patch of green, a thatch of blue,
A batch of fragrant white,
All colours watered and pale.
I wipe my glasses ,
I strain my ears,
Trying to catch a glimpse,
Trying to snatch a note,
Of my receding past,
When I turn the corner
of my Memory Lane!!
All enveloped in warm cotton wool. Laughing voices ,shrieking voices, carefree voices ,
Sailing across cool terraces,
All muted in layers of felt .
A patch of green, a thatch of blue,
A batch of fragrant white,
All colours watered and pale.
I wipe my glasses ,
I strain my ears,
Trying to catch a glimpse,
Trying to snatch a note,
Of my receding past,
When I turn the corner
of my Memory Lane!!
Beautiful expression Dr Rashmi 👏👏
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ReplyDeleteA beautiful expression through memory lane as if walking dn literally 👌👌😍😍 Amit Ranjan ur a college. Batch Mate 😃😃
ReplyDeleteThank you Ravi...glad you liked it.😀
DeleteLoved reading Rashmi. Feels like I am visiting Patna with you. Lots of love and hugs, Umang.🤗
ReplyDeleteThanks Umang. Love and hugs to you too.
DeleteFelt nostalgic for kankar bagh colony,Patna. Beautiful lines Rashmi. Rajeev jha.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajeev. My purpose is served if I take my readers with me.😀🙏
DeleteBeautifully written Rashmi! Open door it was for friends and family😊
ReplyDeleteReminds you of days gone by..
ReplyDeleteNostalgic as before 👌,Dr Meena Birua
ReplyDeleteThanks Meena.
DeleteBeautiful expressed of the lost time which was the most precious time
ReplyDeleteLove it Rashmi. U expressed it so nice.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully expressed the feelings going down the memory lane, makes one nostalgic, feel the numerous things which we miss today. When I visit my village, I find big vacuum there, I miss the vibrant feeling of combined family too. यादों के झरोखे से, Thank you Rashmi for this beautiful expression. Please continue...
ReplyDeleteThanks Vijay. These things remain intact in our memories only..in the real world much haschanged.
Deleteकोरे-नजर गम में हैं नम।
ReplyDeleteऐनक पर यादों के शबनम।
तह पर तह है बातों की ।
चितवन पर आती जाती ।
मन अतीत में डोला है।
पट स्मृति के खोला है।
आंखें जागी -सी सोयी हैं।
उस धुंध गली में खोयी हैं।
Beautiful expression Rashmi.
Deleteधन्यवाद विश्वमोहन।यादों के शबनम में भीगने की सुखद अनुभूति होती है। काव्यात्मक प्रतिक्रिया के लिए आभार।
DeleteTo all my anonymous readers, a big thank you for the time you spare to encourage and cheer me. I only wish you all had left behind your names too.🙏
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ReplyDeleteLoved it . Keep writing ✍
ReplyDeleteThanks Yamini.
DeleteWinds of nostalgia , well expressed 🙂
ReplyDeleteThank you, Namita.😊
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteMemories are always lovable, made us remember our childhood ,Anjula Minz
ReplyDeleteThank you ,Anjula. Yes,childhood memories are rosy.
DeleteReminds me a poetic song by Gulzaar.... छोड़ आए हम वो गलियां .. Great going Rashmi.... Memories of the days gone are always beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Deobrat. Feel honoured that you were reminded of Gulzar's song.
DeleteExpressed beautifully in the most conversational tone. Word taken from speech. No cerebral gymnastics but appeals the heart
ReplyDeleteThis is what poetry should be.
Seema Mishra
ReplyDeleteThanks Seema. You being a professor of English makes you the best judge.Grateful.🙏
DeleteBits of sunshine woven in a veil,so very true,lively lines keep it up Rashmi
ReplyDeleteHi Anjula. Thanks. Seems you wanted to comment on my poem "Amaltas" :)
DeleteAnjula
ReplyDeleteबहुत सुंदर लिखा है। गुलज़ार की याद दिला दी, जिसने लिखा है - थम के रह जाती है जिंदगी, जब जम के बरसती हैं पुरानी यादें।
ReplyDeleteभैया, रांची
Thanks Bhaiya. Another friend was also reminded of a song by Gulzar "chhod aaye hum vo galiyan". :)
DeleteBeautiful. God-speed my dear
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DeleteĹet theink not dry.Lethe emotion not die. My blessinfgs.
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