A poem dedicated to students ...classmates, seniors, juniors...from my alma mater, Patna Science College. Some, I have known from my college days and are best of my friends and some I came to know recently but it feels that I have always known them.
They keep my roots alive.Joss sticks with dim embers,
Their ether softly wafting.
Rhythmic rubbing of sandalwood ,
Their essence slowly lofting.
Red roses with bruised petals,
Their scent making one giddy.
Basketful of star jasmines,
Nothing short of heady.
Aromas escaping the kitchen,
Pungent mustard flaring nostrils afar.
Spices assaulting the senses,
From tangy pickle's open jar.
Caramel and golden grain ,
Their union just heavenly.
Sweetness hovering above,
As they sizzle gingerly.
The memorised morning mantras,
Booming notes of conch shells.
The evening chant with lighted lamps,
The delicate ringing of brass bells.
Scarlet hibiscus kiss the feet,
Bright vermllion in parted hair,
Unmistakable tinkle of glass bangles,
Six yards worn with easy flair.
All gush back to me like a blast.
The smell, sights and sounds,
A vibrant kaleidoscope from the past,
As I come across a bunch of unknown,
But oh! so familiar faces!!
Very nice & nostalgic
ReplyDeleteWhat a poetic way to express thevalue of fragrances of all the flowers which originated from the same root!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lalan. Roots shape the plant.
DeleteYes rashmi that was patna in eighties and nineties. Missing those days. Puja time, Holi Deepawali, chhath were lovely friend n family time. Thanks for showing our memories to past path. Patna was so green n colourful ….
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Patna
Thanks Arti. Friends like you play a big part in keeping memories alive.
DeleteExcellent poem Rashmi. Really liked it. Very matured....
ReplyDeletePUSHKAR SINHA
DeleteGlad you liked it, Pushkar ji. Thank you.
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ReplyDeleteTrue - a very poignant expression. Friends bring colour, fragrance to life to life ❤️
ReplyDeleteVery nicely expressed Rashmi. I guess that these sights, sounds and fragrances are not limited to Patna anymore - they have now spread far and wide within and beyond the Indian shores with the help of all the friends! Such is the strong root of traditions developed in Patna!
ReplyDeleteShashank
Thanks Shashank. You have caught on to the essence. People carry the imprints of a certain place long after they have left it.
DeleteBeautiful Rashmi.So very part of our being and growing up days-nostalgia.You weave emotions and words so well .❤️ Archana
ReplyDeleteThanks Archana. Good memories associated with Patna remain .
DeleteAnother milepost with unforgettable insights.So beautiful..and that's destiny.
ReplyDeleteThanks Deobrat. Some images remain forever.
DeleteBeautifully expressed Rashmi ❤❤
ReplyDeleteThanks Urvashi
DeleteSuperb ๐๐.................Chhaya
ReplyDeleteเคฏाเคฆें, เคฏाเคฆ เคเคคी เคนैं!๐๐๐
ReplyDeleteเคงเคจ्เคฏเคตाเคฆ
DeleteReminiscences of the past - A beautifully woven tapestry of words! Let the ink perpetually flow!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the encouragement
DeleteNice use of metaphorical similes to bring out 'smell, sights and sounds' of past memories. Roots reflects your childhood/adolescence experiences which are still ingrained in you as seen in some of your other poems - The Little Girl, Memory Lane, เคुเคซ़्เคคเคू... เคिंเคฆเคी เคธे.
ReplyDeleteGood writing ๐ ✍
Rajnish
Thanks Rajnish. Great ....you could see a common thread in my writings !☺️
DeleteExcellent as before Rashmi.Meena
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ReplyDeleteNamita Sinha AmbashtAugust 8, 2022 at 1:59 AM
Yet another beautiful write up ! Love the way you make use of all the sensory expressions with similes ๐ And yes, even i completely agree , when i met up with my college mates after decades, i just didn't feel that I was meeting them after ages.Things remained the same. Precious ๐ Admire your grace ❣️
Thank you Namita. True, time elapses but the emotions remain all enveloping.
DeleteSuper ,as previous one, down memory lane Anjula
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjula. The presence of friends presses the "refresh button".☺️
Deleteเคฌเคนुเคค เคธुเคจ्เคฆเคฐ เคเคฐ เคญाเคตเคชूเคฐ्เคฃ เค เคญिเคต्เคฏเค्เคคि เคช्เคฐिเคฏ เคฐเคถ्เคฎि เคी।เคीเคตเคจ เคे เคเคธ เคाเคฒเคंเคก เคी เคธ्เคฎृเคคिเคฏाँ เคเคค्เคฎा เคे เคธाเคฅ เคฒिเคชเคी เคธเคฆैเคต เคญीเคคเคฐ เคฌเคธเคคी เคนैं।๐
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