This time of the year when the mercury is soaring and the earth bakes brown, you come across a very pleasant sight in most Indian cities - the flowering amaltas trees. Despite the blazing sun, the bright yellow flowers come as a respite, reflecting the indomitable spirit of Mother Nature. I clicked the pictures below on my way to work.
Amaltas
The gown is glittering gold,
Spangled with shiny yellow pearls,
Held in strings and streamers,
Ribbons and festoons.
Showers of topaz and citrine,
Cascading to the scalloped hemline.
Gilded eardrops drooping heavy,
Turning crystal chandeliers crimson.
Bits of sunshine woven in the veil,
As dripping silken rows,
Darting light as winds whistle.
Radiant amber beads ,
Swaying and sashaying.
Woodsy fragrance gently wafting.
Delicate bells almost tinkling,
As she tiptoes onto the stage,
Blinding spectators with brilliance,
To hear the proclamation,
"Winner of Nature's Beauty Pageant,
Amaltas !!"
Brought a smile to face. Could draw similies with some real characters in my life. Amaltas - has a very lyrical ring to it ๐
ReplyDeleteTitle is very Very aptly chosen and beautifully explained. Mother nature understands the need of the season and delivers it to us, provided we learn to care for it.. Your inner self is also now blossoming.....keep expressing. Bhaiya.ranchi
ReplyDeleteThanks Bhaiya. Nature is one of the biggest source of inspiration if only we keep our eyes and ears open. Thanks again for the encouragement.
DeleteBrought back memories of childhood and summertime when these trees would be in full bloom. Beautiful๐ฅฐ
ReplyDeleteThanks Archu. There are beautiful trees in NJ too,but non as vibrant as the Amaltas !!$
DeleteI love amaltas a
ReplyDeletelot
...... lovely poem with a lovely heading.... amaltas.
Lovely poem! The Amaltas trees in full bloom around our colony acquire almost a life like form with the metaphors of ‘gown’ and ‘shiny yellow pearls’! Powerful imagery conveying some timeless truth!
ReplyDeleteShashank Priya
Thanks Shashank. Am glad my poem has made you see the trees around you in new light. ๐
DeleteThis is amazing. Thank you for sharing
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading your Amaltas poem. You have expressed the beauty of this native Indian tree through the beautiful lines of your poetry, which ordinary people like us fail to appreciate and admire.
ReplyDeleteSanjay Prasad
Thanks Sanjay. Some of our native trees are a sight to behold. Sad that our town planners don't pay attention.
DeleteBeautiful
ReplyDeleteMetaphorically decorated lines praising the indigenous. The alliterative first line is a good opening...Good effort!
ReplyDeleteThanks Saima. Always a pleasure to have a feedback from a scholar.
DeleteRashmi, Wow ..is this a poem, my heart pounds a little bit more ,know that you have such talent and your words not only touch me, but so many here--keep writing, expressing and touching our souls,
ReplyDeleteThanks Himanshu. "Touching souls" is a big compliment.๐๐
DeleteHimanshu Saran
ReplyDeleteLove to read your next piece.
ReplyDeleteLove to see your next post
ReplyDeleteTo all my "Anonymous" friends...a very big thank you for your appreciation and beautiful comments. I wish I could thank each of you by name. The format on a blog is a bit different...the name does not appear as default.๐๐๐
ReplyDeleteWhatever height the modern science has achieved it can't surpass nature&know all its secrets,Amaltas/it's expression in any way is not reproducible by science,u r a lady of varied talents &u have shown it times without number& the poem Amaltas is one in this series
ReplyDeleteAmarendra jha
Thanks Amarendra for your lavish praise. You are right , man can never create the sort of beauty present in nature, only ape it.
Deleteเคคुเคฎ्เคนाเคฐी เคเคตिเคคा เคจे เคช्เคฐเคृเคคि เคी เคธुंเคฆเคฐเคคा เคฎें เคाเคฐ เคांเคฆ เคฒเคा เคฆिเค।
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เคงเคจ्เคฏเคตाเคฆ เคเคฐ เคเคญाเคฐ เคंเคฆเคจ।เค เคญी เคोเคถिเคถ เคเคฐ เคฐเคนी เคนूँ, เคคुเคฎ เคฒोเค เคी เคฐाเคน เคเคฒ เคชाเคं !☺️
Deleteเคฏे เคเคตिเคคा เคเคฒि เคเคเคจाเคฐ-เคธी,
ReplyDeleteเคฎौเคฒเคถ्เคฐी เคा เคนाเคธ।
เคถเคฌ्เคฆ เคธเคे เคुเคฒเคฎोเคนเคฐ - เคธे,
เคถเคฐเคฌเคคी เค เคฎเคฒเคคाเคธ!!!
เคธเคเคฎुเค เคाเคธ เคนै เคฏे เค เคฎเคฒเคคाเคธ
Deleteเคเคธ เคธुंเคฆเคฐ เคाเคต्เคฏाเคค्เคฎเค เคช्เคฐเคคिเค्เคฐिเคฏा เคे เคฒिเค เคเคญाเคฐ เคเคฐ เคงเคจ्เคฏเคตाเคฆ
DeleteRashmi, another beautiful piece. Keep it up dear.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading it.
Sulagna
Thanks dear. Keep bucking me up and I will keep trying.
Deleteเคช्เคฐเคृเคคि เคी เคूเคी เค เคจोเคी
ReplyDeleteเคฐเคाเคฏे เคเคคु เค เคจूเค ा เคिเคค्เคฐ
เคงू-เคงू เคฆिเคจ เคे เคैเคจเคตाเคธ เคชเคฐ
เคชीเคค เคคिเคคเคฒिเคฏाँ เคुंเคก เคตिเคिเคค्เคฐ।
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เคฌेเคนเคฆ เคूเคฌเคธूเคฐเคค เคฒिเคा เคนै เคเคชเคจे เคฐเคถ्เคฎि เคी।
เคเคชเคจे เคธंเค्เคทेเคช เคฎें เคिเคคเคจा เคช्เคฏाเคฐा เคिเคค्เคฐ เคींเคा। เคเคญाเคฐ เคเคฐ เคงเคจ्เคฏเคตाเคฆ।๐๐
DeleteBeautiful n lively ''prescription' of Amaltas !! Well done Rashmi
ReplyDeleteKrishna Sahu
Thank you Sahu. Will strive to write better and better prescriptions !!☺️
DeleteGlided while reading ur beauuuuutiful poem awesomely expressed ๐ Amit Ranjan ๐
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ravi.,๐
DeleteDaffodils have been pretty praised in English literature. However, nothing at par is available in Indian, esp. Hindi literature on Amaltas, deservedly a praiseworthy flower. Its flowers' captive beauty attracted the attention of the Indian Postal Department that had issued a stamp on it. Truly can be said that beauty can survive also without patronage but can't be resisted adoration. Great poem, well effort Rashmi, but a modest suggetion, publish somewhere in some magazine so as to make it reach to the masses. In the end, kudos to your poetic talent! Hats off!๐๐
ReplyDeleteThank you Vachaspati for your generous praise.
DeleteUnfortunately ,Hindi and other regional languages don't have that reach, but things are gradually changing. Newer platforms are emerging which have fast and wider reach.๐
WOW!! What a talent! Dr. Rashmi,the poet! Mighty impressed! Such attention to details as well as the use of literary devices! Amaltas,yes,it brought bck the lovely memories of my childhood too.Look forward to more such precious gems! Loads of love!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for the critique. Wish you had left your name.๐๐
DeleteLovely poem Rashmi,I really appreciate your love for nature and beautiful lines written by you.๐
ReplyDeleteThank you Shobha. Rare is a person who will not love nature.๐
DeleteI especially loved the line below
ReplyDelete"Winner of Nature's Beauty Pageant,
Amaltas !!"
Superbly penned, echoes of Mother Nature!
I love being human, however after reading your cute little poem, I wish I was an Amaltas tree ๐
Keep writing, my best wishes!
Cheers
Thank you for the appreciation and encouragement.The desire to be one like the amaltas shows how keen a nature lover you yourself are!!☺️
DeleteThe personification is indeed a surprise! Novel treatment of the 'swaying and sashaying' flowers and trees. The entire presentation in the form of the pageant brings a smile to the dried lips of the readers.
ReplyDeleteProfessor sahiba...love your critique ! Thank you.
DeleteTanu
ReplyDeleteเค เคฎเคฒเคคाเคธ เคนเคฎाเคฐा เค เคฎเคฒเคชुเคท्เคช เคนै
ReplyDeleteเคाเคธ เคนी เคจเคนी ,เคญाเคฐเคคीเคฏเคคा เคा เคธ्เคตเคฐूเคช เคนै
เคธ्เคตเคฐ्เคฃिเคฎ เคชीเคฒाเคชเคจ เคธเคฆाเคฌเคนाเคฐ เคนै
เคฎเคจ เคฎเคธ्เคคिเคท्เค เคे เคฒिเค เค เคฆ्เคญुเคค เคเคชเคนाเคฐ เคนै......Munich se๐๐ป
Munich เคฎें เคธुंเคฆเคฐ เคซूเคฒों เคธे เคिเคฐे เคนुเค เคนो, เคเคฐ เค เคฎเคฒเคคाเคธ เคे เคुเคฃ เคเคฏा เคฐเคนे เคนो !! เคเคธ เคाเคต्เคฏाเคค्เคฎเค เคช्เคฐเคคिเค्เคฐिเคฏा เคा เคเคญाเคฐ !๐
DeleteAmazing so descriptive Rashmi. Would like to read more of your articles. Keep it up. All the best.
ReplyDeleteCopying and pasting my father's comments as he sent me on WA after struggling for some time on the blog!!☺️
ReplyDeleteI do not know how mร ny summers have gone by amaltas unnoticed. But only nowit stirred your emotions .Wordsworth was right in defining poetry as emotional outburst of powerful feelings recollected in tranquility. Shakespeare said " There is tide in the affairs of man which when taken in flood leads to fortune .Tide has come and my blessings. Papa.
Blessings and genes seem to be at work.๐๐
Deleteเคซूเคฒों เคे เคฐंเค เคธे เคฆिเคฒ เคी เคเคฒเคฎ เคธे เคฒिเคा เคคुเคฎ्เคนाเคฐा เค เคฎเคฒเคคाเคธ เคฌเคนुเคค เค เค्เคा เคฒเคा เคฐเคถ्เคฎि। เคฏूँ เคนी เคฒिเคเคคी เคฐเคนो।
ReplyDeleteเคจीเคฐเค
เคเคธी เคเคฒเคฎ เคธे เคคुเคฎ्เคนें เคงเคจ्เคฏเคตाเคฆ เคฒिเค เคฐเคนी เคนूँ।๐๐
ReplyDelete"Winner of Nature's Beauty Pageant,
ReplyDeleteAmaltas
Beautiful n lively Creation
Wow !!!
Thank you, so much.
DeleteWinner of Nature's beauty pageant - Amaltas - you're right, the word Amaltas evokes a different meaning and really takes, at lease me, back to childhood, no other name will do. - Sampa
ReplyDeleteThanks Sampa,if I am not mistaken there was a gulmohar tree in front of your house..talk of childhood memories๐
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