Amaltas

This time of the year when the mercury is soaring and the earth bakes brown, you come across a very pleasant sight in most Indian cities - the flowering amaltas trees. Despite the blazing sun, the bright yellow flowers come as a respite, reflecting the indomitable spirit of Mother Nature. I clicked the pictures below on my way to work.

At the cost of ire of purists, I have chosen to use the name amaltas over laburnum. Few names have a very lyrical and poetic ring to it, like  gulmohar, maulashree, kachnaar...and amaltas! I thought it was a shame not to use it in the Indian scenario.


Amaltas

The gown is glittering gold,
Spangled with shiny yellow pearls,
Held in strings and streamers,
Ribbons and festoons.
Showers of topaz and citrine,
Cascading to the scalloped hemline.
Gilded eardrops drooping heavy,
Turning crystal chandeliers crimson.
Bits of sunshine woven in the veil,
As dripping silken rows,
Darting light as winds whistle.
Radiant amber beads ,
Swaying and sashaying.
Woodsy fragrance gently wafting.
Delicate bells almost tinkling,
As she tiptoes onto the stage,
Blinding spectators with brilliance,
To hear the proclamation,
"Winner of  Nature's Beauty Pageant,
Amaltas !!"

57 comments:

  1. Brought a smile to face. Could draw similies with some real characters in my life. Amaltas - has a very lyrical ring to it ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  2. Title is very Very aptly chosen and beautifully explained. Mother nature understands the need of the season and delivers it to us, provided we learn to care for it.. Your inner self is also now blossoming.....keep expressing. Bhaiya.ranchi

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    1. Thanks Bhaiya. Nature is one of the biggest source of inspiration if only we keep our eyes and ears open. Thanks again for the encouragement.

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  3. Brought back memories of childhood and summertime when these trees would be in full bloom. Beautiful๐Ÿฅฐ

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    1. Thanks Archu. There are beautiful trees in NJ too,but non as vibrant as the Amaltas !!$

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  4. I love amaltas a
    lot
    ...... lovely poem with a lovely heading.... amaltas.

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  5. Lovely poem! The Amaltas trees in full bloom around our colony acquire almost a life like form with the metaphors of ‘gown’ and ‘shiny yellow pearls’! Powerful imagery conveying some timeless truth!
    Shashank Priya

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    1. Thanks Shashank. Am glad my poem has made you see the trees around you in new light. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  6. This is amazing. Thank you for sharing

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  7. Enjoyed reading your Amaltas poem. You have expressed the beauty of this native Indian tree through the beautiful lines of your poetry, which ordinary people like us fail to appreciate and admire.
    Sanjay Prasad

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    1. Thanks Sanjay. Some of our native trees are a sight to behold. Sad that our town planners don't pay attention.

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  8. Metaphorically decorated lines praising the indigenous. The alliterative first line is a good opening...Good effort!

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    1. Thanks Saima. Always a pleasure to have a feedback from a scholar.

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  9. Rashmi, Wow ..is this a poem, my heart pounds a little bit more ,know that you have such talent and your words not only touch me, but so many here--keep writing, expressing and touching our souls,

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    1. Thanks Himanshu. "Touching souls" is a big compliment.๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜€

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  10. Himanshu Saran

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  11. Love to read your next piece.

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  12. Love to see your next post

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  13. To all my "Anonymous" friends...a very big thank you for your appreciation and beautiful comments. I wish I could thank each of you by name. The format on a blog is a bit different...the name does not appear as default.๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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  14. Whatever height the modern science has achieved it can't surpass nature&know all its secrets,Amaltas/it's expression in any way is not reproducible by science,u r a lady of varied talents &u have shown it times without number& the poem Amaltas is one in this series
    Amarendra jha

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    1. Thanks Amarendra for your lavish praise. You are right , man can never create the sort of beauty present in nature, only ape it.

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  15. เคคुเคฎ्เคนाเคฐी เค•เคตिเคคा เคจे เคช्เคฐเค•ृเคคि เค•ी เคธुंเคฆเคฐเคคा เคฎें เคšाเคฐ เคšांเคฆ เคฒเค—ा เคฆिเค।

    Chandan

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    1. เคงเคจ्เคฏเคตाเคฆ เค”เคฐ เค†เคญाเคฐ เคšंเคฆเคจ।เค…เคญी เค•ोเคถिเคถ เค•เคฐ เคฐเคนी เคนूँ, เคคुเคฎ เคฒोเค— เค•ी เคฐाเคน เคšเคฒ เคชाเคŠं !☺️

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  16. เคฏे เค•เคตिเคคा เค•เคฒि เค•เคšเคจाเคฐ-เคธी,
    เคฎौเคฒเคถ्เคฐी เค•ा เคนाเคธ।
    เคถเคฌ्เคฆ เคธเคœे เค—ुเคฒเคฎोเคนเคฐ - เคธे,
    เคถเคฐเคฌเคคी เค…เคฎเคฒเคคाเคธ!!!

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    1. เคธเคšเคฎुเคš เค–ाเคธ เคนै เคฏे เค…เคฎเคฒเคคाเคธ

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    2. เค‡เคธ เคธुंเคฆเคฐ เค•ाเคต्เคฏाเคค्เคฎเค• เคช्เคฐเคคिเค•्เคฐिเคฏा เค•े เคฒिเค เค†เคญाเคฐ เค”เคฐ เคงเคจ्เคฏเคตाเคฆ

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  17. Rashmi, another beautiful piece. Keep it up dear.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Sulagna

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    1. Thanks dear. Keep bucking me up and I will keep trying.

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  18. เคช्เคฐเค•ृเคคि เค•ी เค•ूเคšी เค…เคจोเค–ी
    เคฐเคšाเคฏे เค‹เคคु เค…เคจूเค ा เคšिเคค्เคฐ
    เคงू-เคงू เคฆिเคจ เค•े เค•ैเคจเคตाเคธ เคชเคฐ
    เคชीเคค เคคिเคคเคฒिเคฏाँ เคुंเคก เคตिเคšिเคค्เคฐ।
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    เคฌेเคนเคฆ เค–ूเคฌเคธूเคฐเคค เคฒिเค–ा เคนै เค†เคชเคจे เคฐเคถ्เคฎि เคœी।




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    1. เค†เคชเคจे เคธंเค•्เคทेเคช เคฎें เค•िเคคเคจा เคช्เคฏाเคฐा เคšिเคค्เคฐ เค–ींเคšा। เค†เคญाเคฐ เค”เคฐ เคงเคจ्เคฏเคตाเคฆ।๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™

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  19. Beautiful n lively ''prescription' of Amaltas !! Well done Rashmi
    Krishna Sahu

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    1. Thank you Sahu. Will strive to write better and better prescriptions !!☺️

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  20. Glided while reading ur beauuuuutiful poem awesomely expressed ๐Ÿ‘Œ Amit Ranjan ๐Ÿ˜

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  21. Daffodils have been pretty praised in English literature. However, nothing at par is available in Indian, esp. Hindi literature on Amaltas, deservedly a praiseworthy flower. Its flowers' captive beauty attracted the attention of the Indian Postal Department that had issued a stamp on it. Truly can be said that beauty can survive also without patronage but can't be resisted adoration. Great poem, well effort Rashmi, but a modest suggetion, publish somewhere in some magazine so as to make it reach to the masses. In the end, kudos to your poetic talent! Hats off!๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ

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    1. Thank you Vachaspati for your generous praise.
      Unfortunately ,Hindi and other regional languages don't have that reach, but things are gradually changing. Newer platforms are emerging which have fast and wider reach.๐Ÿ˜Š

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  22. WOW!! What a talent! Dr. Rashmi,the poet! Mighty impressed! Such attention to details as well as the use of literary devices! Amaltas,yes,it brought bck the lovely memories of my childhood too.Look forward to more such precious gems! Loads of love!

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    1. Thank you so much for the critique. Wish you had left your name.๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ™

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  23. Lovely poem Rashmi,I really appreciate your love for nature and beautiful lines written by you.๐Ÿ‘Œ

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    1. Thank you Shobha. Rare is a person who will not love nature.๐Ÿ˜Š

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  24. I especially loved the line below

    "Winner of  Nature's Beauty Pageant,
    Amaltas !!"

    Superbly penned, echoes of Mother Nature!

    I love being human, however after reading your cute little poem, I wish I was an Amaltas tree ๐Ÿ˜Š

    Keep writing, my best wishes!
    Cheers

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    1. Thank you for the appreciation and encouragement.The desire to be one like the amaltas shows how keen a nature lover you yourself are!!☺️

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  25. The personification is indeed a surprise! Novel treatment of the 'swaying and sashaying' flowers and trees. The entire presentation in the form of the pageant brings a smile to the dried lips of the readers.

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    1. Professor sahiba...love your critique ! Thank you.

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  26. เค…เคฎเคฒเคคाเคธ เคนเคฎाเคฐा เค…เคฎเคฒเคชुเคท्เคช เคนै
    เค–ाเคธ เคนी เคจเคนी ,เคญाเคฐเคคीเคฏเคคा เค•ा เคธ्เคตเคฐूเคช เคนै
    เคธ्เคตเคฐ्เคฃिเคฎ เคชीเคฒाเคชเคจ เคธเคฆाเคฌเคนाเคฐ เคนै
    เคฎเคจ เคฎเคธ्เคคिเคท्เค• เค•े เคฒिเค เค…เคฆ्เคญुเคค เค‰เคชเคนाเคฐ เคนै......Munich se๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

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    1. Munich เคฎें เคธुंเคฆเคฐ เคซूเคฒों เคธे เค˜िเคฐे เคนुเค เคนो, เค”เคฐ เค…เคฎเคฒเคคाเคธ เค•े เค—ुเคฃ เค—เคฏा เคฐเคนे เคนो !! เค‡เคธ เค•ाเคต्เคฏाเคค्เคฎเค• เคช्เคฐเคคिเค•्เคฐिเคฏा เค•ा เค†เคญाเคฐ !๐Ÿ’

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  27. Amazing so descriptive Rashmi. Would like to read more of your articles. Keep it up. All the best.

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  28. Copying and pasting my father's comments as he sent me on WA after struggling for some time on the blog!!☺️

    I do not know how mร ny summers have gone by amaltas unnoticed. But only nowit stirred your emotions .Wordsworth was right in defining poetry as emotional outburst of powerful feelings recollected in tranquility. Shakespeare said " There is tide in the affairs of man which when taken in flood leads to fortune .Tide has come and my blessings. Papa.

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    1. Blessings and genes seem to be at work.๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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  29. เคซूเคฒों เค•े เคฐंเค— เคธे เคฆिเคฒ เค•ी เค•เคฒเคฎ เคธे เคฒिเค–ा เคคुเคฎ्เคนाเคฐा เค…เคฎเคฒเคคाเคธ เคฌเคนुเคค เค…เคš्เค›ा เคฒเค—ा เคฐเคถ्เคฎि। เคฏूँ เคนी เคฒिเค–เคคी เคฐเคนो।
    เคจीเคฐเคœ

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  30. เค‰เคธी เค•เคฒเคฎ เคธे เคคुเคฎ्เคนें เคงเคจ्เคฏเคตाเคฆ เคฒिเค– เคฐเคนी เคนूँ।๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜Š

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  31. "Winner of Nature's Beauty Pageant,
    Amaltas

    Beautiful n lively Creation
    Wow !!!

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  32. Winner of Nature's beauty pageant - Amaltas - you're right, the word Amaltas evokes a different meaning and really takes, at lease me, back to childhood, no other name will do. - Sampa

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    1. Thanks Sampa,if I am not mistaken there was a gulmohar tree in front of your house..talk of childhood memories๐Ÿ˜Š

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