Mother


A female dons many hats all her life, but the role of a mother is pivotal. I have telescoped the major milestones of a mother's life into a short poem on the occasion of Mother's Day.
This is an ode to my mother, who made me what I am.


When the scalpel sliced ,
Through the umbilical cord,
And the warm liquid oozed,
She knew not whose blood shed,
She hurt.

When elbows scraped,
And knees grazed,
The skin raw through the bruise,
She knew not whose plasma seeped,
She hurt.

Heavy books and late night toil,
Assignment deadlines met,
Eyes to the blue screen glued,
She knew not whose sweat poured,
She hurt.

Finally striding into the world,
A fine confident specimen,
Apron strings cut loose,
She knew whose tears rolled,
She smiled !


52 comments:

  1. Beautiful expression of essence of motherhood!

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  2. Very touching account of the journey of a child from the umbilical chord to the matured life under the shadow of love, affection and care of mother! God could not present himself everywhere. So he created Mother, a creation even greater than Himself. Congratulations! Keep writing.

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    1. Thank you so much ,Vishwamohan for your encouragement and appreciation.

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  3. Wow. That's beautiful Mona di.

    Would love to keep reading your writing.

    Much love

    Shilpa.

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    1. Hi Shilpa, so glad you liked it. That's the best reward any writer can receive. Will sure keep you posted.Thank you.

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  4. Wonderful expressons and beautiful lines of gratitude ! Keep expressing. Bhaiya-Ranchi

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    1. Thanks Bhaiya for the encouragement and blessings.

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  5. Very good lines!. Motherhood sensitised!

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    1. Thank you Saima. From one mother to another.😀

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  6. Deeply touched Rashmi. Keep writing.

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  7. Wow!! Read it today on mother’s day ! I am sure your mom must be smiling with pride looking at you and your younger sister Mona di.

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    1. Thank you so much. Wish I could identify you. I do hope my mother is smiling down on us...my sister and I have strived hard to be the wonderful, multifaceted, and loving person that she was.

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  8. Shobha Rani SinhaMay 8, 2022 at 7:02 AM

    Beautiful poem Rashmi,Very touching.

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    1. Thank you, Shobha. All mothers would relate to it.

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  9. Lovely lines dost. You have seen it through your medical eyes. As an engineer I would say moms are great engineers who built my past present n future. She is my foundation , structure , plinth, reinforcement and best architect . Love u mummy 💕💗❤️🎉🎊🙏 . Hope u will guess who is this dear 🎉🎊🙏

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    1. Arti Sinha from patna . Keep writing. Excellent 👌 you

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    2. Thank you dost. You left enough hints so that I could identify you. Beautifully expressed by you as an engineer !
      That reminds me, mummy was your your teacher too.😊


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  10. Excellent poem Rashmi

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  11. Touched by your expressions Rashmi !! What a wonderful tribute to your mother as well as to all the mothers in the world !!
    Saloni

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    1. Thank you, Saloni was your appreciation.
      These feeling for a mother are universal.

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  12. Copying and pasting my father's comments from WA as he is couldn't get past the technicalities of a blog.

    Your poem has ďeeply touched my heart. Vishwamohan has rightly said that mother is the reincarnation of God on the èarth. Iam reminded of the shortest story in the world on mother. À beloved asked his lover that if he really loved her he should bring ,her mother 's hèart to me.Mad in love he cut off her hèartand ran to his beloved. While running he dashed against a stone. The heart fell on the earth and the sound


    emitted in emotion choked voice" Beta chot to nahi lagi "That is mother.

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  13. The above heart-wrenching had come down to me by my grandmother which I diligently passed on to my kids...I hope it should go on by the word of mouth..

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  14. This is so beautiful ❤❤❤ and so beautifully expressed too👌👌👌
    Urvashi Choudhary

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  15. Dear Rashmi, Beautiful poem.... Great expression.... Touched a chord somewhere. Keep writing... Much Love .. Neena

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    1. Thank you Neena for appreciation. Words will never be sufficient to describe the emotions one has for a mother.

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  16. Beautifully penned and true . Compliments

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  17. From cradle to grave, in the becoming /achievements/success of daughter.... selfless love and sacrifice of mother has been projected well by you Rashmi.... Look forward to more such soulful lines by you. Since am not tech-savvy, therefore I request you to put my comments on your blog.😊😊

    I am copying and pasting Soni sharma’s comments. Love u Soni n feeling proud Ing posting your comments here.

    Arti Sinha

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    1. Hi Soni, Arti has posted your comments on your behalf. Thank you for the wonderful words of appreciation. Hope you become "tech savvy"soon...if I could do it, so can you !☺️#

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  18. Excellent poem, Rashmi! ❤️It has been rightly said that poetry is for the heart, not for the head. From one mother to another, expressing gratitude, for mother’s giving nature. It’s not an easy job to put into words how much our mothers mean to us…..A soulful tribute to your mother👌🏻👌🏻

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    1. Thank you Rosy. Means a lot coming from a Prof. of English literature.😀

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  19. ❤️ Best wishes to the budding poet in you. Will keepi looking for more of your ruminations.- Sujata

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    1. Thank you ,Sujata. You have been part of my journey .

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  20. Loved reading this. Very different from all the poems written on moms/mothers. Very original!! Good job!!

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    1. Thank you ,Anuja. Glad you liked it and found it different.😀🙏

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  21. Beautiful Feeling from the Heart Brought Tears to my Eyes . Touched the Soul. Rumi

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  22. Nice to see this facet of you Rashmi.
    The role of the mother painted in multiple hues is very symbolic of all the innumerable ways in which she is so much a part of. Very differently expressed.
    Tanu

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    1. Thank you Prof sahiba. Value your appraisal.
      ,😀

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  23. "Dear Rashmi
    Such a beautiful ode to your mom. Her memories are alive and her blessings are always pouring down on you from heavens above.💞 Lots of hugs, Umang"

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  24. Very evocative and sensitive poem bringing out the many facets of your mother’s love in such a beautiful verse. This would strike a chord in many a heart and tug at many emotions! May she continue to shower her blessings on you and your siblings.
    Shashank

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    1. Thanks Shashank ! That is one serious and wonderful review..you seem to have the potentials of a writer yourself !!☺️

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  25. Heavy books and late night toil,
    Assignment deadlines met,
    Eyes to the blue screen glued,
    She knew not whose sweat poured,
    She hurt.
    Very heart touching sensitive and wonderful poem.

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  26. Beautiful sentiments Rashmi, She hurt, she cried, she clapped, she smiled, she laughed, she hugged - as a Mother she excelled. Keep writing. - Sampa

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    1. A mother is nothing less ! Thanks for the encouragement.

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